PARAGRAPH

1. Theme: Buying A Personal Computer.

2. Audience: Public.

3. Narrow:

Buying A PC (Theme).

Criteria Of A Good PC (Topic).

Hard Disk Capacity (Sub Topic).

4. Ideas:

a. The capacity is 80 gigabyte.

b. It makes you easier to save data.

c. It makes your PC more powerful.

d. The seller will cheat you.

e. You can install many programmes.

f. You can divide it into some drivers.

g. The higher the capacity is, the better the PC will be.

h. You will be proud of yourself.

5. Restriction:

Advantages.

Advantages.

Effects.

6. Topic and Concluding Sentences:

· When you want to buy a new PC, you should check the hard disk capacity first. (T.S.)

· Remember, don’t let the seller cheat you! (C.S.)

7. Point Paragraph:

a. The seller will cheat you.

b. The capacity is 80 GB.

c. It makes you easier to save data.

d. You can divide it into some drivers.

e. You will be proud of yourself.

8. Paragraph:

When you want to buy a new PC, you should check the hard disk capacity first. Sometimes, the seller does not tell you about it and he will give you the small one. You should be more careful when he just keeps silent. However, the newest hard disk capacity is 80 gigabyte. It is a huge capacity that you have ever known. Therefore, you can save much data you want or divide it into some drivers in order that you will have your own drivers for music, picture, game, and data. I am sure that you are not going to be confused to search for your old data folder or your game folder. Moreover, you can show up your new PC with a large hard disk capacity to your friends and you must be proud of your self. Remember, don’t let the seller cheat you.